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Cheer Yourself Deaf (opinions greatly appreciated)
« on: May 06, 2010, 09:20:36 AM »

If you have the time let me know what you think...

www.myspace.com/cheeryourselfdeaf .
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Re: Cheer Yourself Deaf (opinions greatly appreciated)
« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2010, 09:55:09 AM »

You have the beginnings of something good here.  I like the quirky nature.  You could really go somewhere with these as intros/hooks.

The timing seem a little off on the onew about the net and the french village.  If it's not actually off, it's a bit off-putting to me.  the first seems a bit jerky, and the second a bit behind with the sousaphone.

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Re: Cheer Yourself Deaf (opinions greatly appreciated)
« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2010, 09:58:25 AM »

You have the beginnings of something good here.  I like the quirky nature.  You could really go somewhere with these as intros/hooks.

The timing seem a little off on the onew about the net and the french village.  If it's not actually off, it's a bit off-putting to me.  the first seems a bit jerky, and the second a bit behind with the sousaphone.



Thanks for the comments. They are rough versions so a few parts do need to be tightened up for sure.
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Re: Cheer Yourself Deaf (opinions greatly appreciated)
« Reply #3 on: May 06, 2010, 10:39:39 AM »

your tunes are strangely hypnotic, i like. it makes me think of dumbo!
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Re: Cheer Yourself Deaf (opinions greatly appreciated)
« Reply #4 on: May 06, 2010, 11:00:31 AM »

I actually left a comment as an edit on the musicians thread but in case you haven't seen it. I like it. Also agree with the "hypnotic" remark by sylvia. It's a type of music that you could walk into a room and instantly feel different about that room. I get that kind of feeling with something like Nico ("Marble Index" in particular) and Evelyn Eveyln. It just seems to have the mood of somewhere else about it. 
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Re: Cheer Yourself Deaf (opinions greatly appreciated)
« Reply #5 on: May 06, 2010, 11:13:18 AM »

Thanks kindly for the comments... I hadn't thought about it being hypnotic, or 'mood changing' so that's cool to hear. Much appreciated.
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Re: Cheer Yourself Deaf (opinions greatly appreciated)
« Reply #6 on: May 16, 2010, 06:20:12 PM »

If anyone is interested I have added another track...
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