In that case, have you considered writing it using language that's more strictly redolent of that era? I read the first couple of pages and found that some of the language/phrases used seemed quite modern and colloquial, which jarred a bit with the Grimm's fairytale-esque setting I imagined. For example, the phrase "massive facial trauma" seems too technical and medicalised for the time, more CSI than 19th C. So yeah, I think at times the language slips into being too modern, unless that's your intention, maybe try and work on that in future drafts. Just a suggestion.
But seems like some good work so far. I'll read more when I get a chance. Did you do the artwork?